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Clarity - Crystal Clear
This is a song about the way to and the feelings of clarity. Crystal clear… Liebe Grüße Karsten
Clarity by Anna PiuttiWas I thinking so loudly?
A heart absorbs the absurd
on a regular basis.
Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are
stage smoke;
but fragrant whispers from
your skin are
open windows
on relief.
And I see,
and I laugh:
I
know
nothing.
Copyright ©2006 Anna Piutti
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/anna_piutti/poems/22001
This is a song about the way to and the feelings of clarity. Crystal clear… Liebe Grüße Karsten
Clarity by Anna PiuttiWas I thinking so loudly?
A heart absorbs the absurd
on a regular basis.
Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are
stage smoke;
but fragrant whispers from
your skin are
open windows
on relief.
And I see,
and I laugh:
I
know
nothing.
Copyright ©2006 Anna Piutti
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/anna_piutti/poems/22001
Kommentare (7)
smartsmurf
meinte am 06.02.2010 um 15:15 Uhr
Welcome to the "Poem Community"... 
You may like to convince me that this poem is your inspiration... Well.. I am not convinced. Your track is not the music I hear when I read these crystal clear words...
You may like to convince me that this poem is your inspiration... Well.. I am not convinced. Your track is not the music I hear when I read these crystal clear words...
Rana
meinte am 06.02.2010 um 05:40 Uhr
Yet it remains unclear that why Anna wrote what she wrote and you have taken the inspiration to bring some clarity to what she said but the smoke still clouds the vision and purpose.
Beautiful track..perhaps the only thing would be that you may perhaps look at a slightly shorter length but this is only my personal opinion.
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