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Let me know if you like this...
When you produce music (or any other kind of art)... first and most important thing is... that you like it yourself. Because if you & don't try to please others and wait for their reactions you are able to continue your way. Have fun in what you're doing, be creative... feel free to express yourself...
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I like your track... it has a very good structure... 
But you have to watch your peakmeter carefully... (if you use Musicmaker it's in the videomonitor on the right side). Try to keep the master volume under 0 db. Use mastering tools to control the volume of each track to keep max volume down... For now there's too much overmodulation...
4* anyway... (I made the same mistake in the beginning, and got away with 5*)
But never ask that question again... 
P.S.:
Listen much and you will learn...