Fictitious Streams

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SpriteBat wrote on 2011-12-29

All original. All lyrics and vocals by me. I also recorded an egg shaker, which can be heard during one of the instrumental sections.

This is part of my progressive rock album that also contains "Thoughts Amassing" and "First Intermission". This will be the 6th song, before the final song (Thoughts Amassing). Sorry that I am not finishing them in the correct order. You will just have to arrange them once they are all complete.

This is a song about how I love to sleep and dream, and how all dreams serve some purpose whether we understand it or not. This topic, along with the partly symphonic sound of the music, might remind you of my old "Dream Saga Symphony" project.;-) It is especially symphonic towards the end. The final section actually comes from a composition I made when I was about 16 years old. Now I finally decided to use it in one of my official songs, because it seemed like a good way to end this piece. Then the last step was the lyrics. I wrote most of them after the music was finished.

Lyrics:

Sometimes I'm overwhelmed
in dreams of heavenly delight
Floating through these perfect realms
is how I wish to spend my nights
But even nightmares offer
an escape from all the same old things
When dreams are unpredictable
there are no plans and no routines

Just aimless simulations
with great imagination
Just innocent meandering
to unexplored locations
As if I was much younger
filled with a sense of wonder
Amid a grand and massive land
My own mind pulls me under...

The illusion, artificial and synthetic
Crafted and contrived by some hidden part of me

All senses heightened here
Emotions clearer, more awake
No need to be frightened here
Where every feature is a fake
And even when my darkest fears
assemble on the battlefield
The war is insignificant
Reality will be my shield

The scheme is truly gentle
No dream is detrimental
When puzzle pieces fall in place
is it coincidental?
The mystery is blinding
But answers are unwinding
Becoming clear as I draw near
Unravel as I'm finding...

The illusion, artificial and synthetic
Crafted and contrived by some hidden part of me

We sleep for one third of our lives
But that doesn't seem like enough to me
I want that fraction increased
I'll sleep for one half at least

I just want to sleep
I've sowed, now I'll reap, and I'll
walk along fictitious streams, I'll
live another life in dreams, with
youth and innocence redeemed I'll
find a purely perfect dream

 

Thanks for listening! As always, I would love to hear your most honest opinions.

The picture is from google.

Comments (14)
DavideAngelini said on 2012-01-02 10:34 PM

Excelent progressive work! in some passages remembers me something of the first Genesis..and your vocals emember something of the singer of Caravan. It captures the attention of the listener, without boring at all.

5* and FAV

Hello and Good 2012!

Davide

jorual said on 2011-12-31 10:02 AM

Hi Spritebat,

Great composition, music for dreaming and great voice.

Regards Jorual

ANTONIOFIORILLO said on 2011-12-30 08:09 PM

When Sandro call ... I answer !!
Of course it is Progressive Rock .. remember my a lot The Canterbury Rock Progressive Style ..
Great work of lyrics and music
5*****+++++
with friendship
Antonio Fiorillo

Guitorb said on 2011-12-30 02:25 PM

 MOST IMPRESSIVE! Your lyrics are awesome. YOU CAN WRITE! I thought it was clever the way you used a vocoder for the part,"The illusion, artificial and synthetic Crafted and contrived by some hidden part of me". The music is a positive experience also.

 Don't get me started on dreams! I took the family out to Culver's late last night for Concrete Mixers. I had a chocolate ice cream with mint syrup and brownie clusters. I had anxiety dreams all night long! :-(:$:-D:-D.

 Anyway, that was an excellent song. I'm looking forward to hearing the rest of your album. Perhaps you could make a podcast of it and put it up on mixcloud.com for us. That would be nice.

monishcoolice said on 2011-12-30 06:27 AM

love u sprite you always rock awsome compo u r no doubt in rating ur song u dng best all the best for future happy new year

sandro-glavina said on 2011-12-29 11:55 PM

WONDERFUL LONG TRACK !!! MY OPINION  IS "A GREAT JOB OF PROGRESSIVE MUSIC " !! FANTASTIC !! NOW  I  SEND TO ANTONIO FIORILLO (VERY EXPERT OF PROG) AN INVITE TO LISTEN AND IF ANTONIO IS AGREE, WE will  POST YOUR TRACK IN PROGRESSIVE PROJECT IN WWW.EVENTIJAZZ.jimdo.com

 

Frankie-Kay said on 2011-12-29 08:34 PM

sehr schöne musik, die sich nach und nach entwickelt :-)

very well... i like it & wish you a happy new year. May you continue so creative ideas.

liebe grüße,

frank     

***** + fav  

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kathyjuan said on 2011-12-29 08:34 PM

hola  amigo:-D

 buena musica:-D y buena voz cantado;-)

 juan

huck said on 2011-12-29 07:03 PM

Hallo!

Ein sehr schöner Soundtrack!!!!

Gut gemacht!!!!

Gruß Huck!

DJrox said on 2011-12-29 07:00 PM

I've just seen that my cats love it...perhaps they're dreaming  !!    :-D

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