Concept:
This is about a dream of watching my love's vessel carry her away to distant lands, and the promise to await her return faithfully,no matter how long it takes.The frustration and madness, the desperation and torture of being without the other half of the self.
So imagine if you will, being a light keeper with a weathered eye upon turbulent seas, You do not sleep, You do not eat...you keep flame on the furnace that reflects from mirrors into lenses that issue forth a beam...across the great expanse of the ocean...to light the way...for your..love's return to your needy arms.....that is a "Vigil"
Lyrics:
"The Vigil"by Heaven'sSpear
Wait right here for me
Wait right here my baby
Wait right here my loving one
I'll be back before you blink
Liar..
Where now have you flown
Absconder,where now have you gone
Ive been waiting here for you, it seems for a thousand years...please come home
Ive been drowning in a downpour of as many tears, pleading dont go
I'll wait here for you,just like this
I'll wait here for you...as once promised
I'll wait and keep so still..and so quiet...til you come home
and with a memory of your kiss, I'll keep flame on the torch
...I alone
Life is stormy weather
and it will last forever
until you come back to me
My oceanic Treasure
Ive endured...and endeavored
to be vigilent and watch the seas
You see, my inner child awaits from a time when we were born
but for the man's sake, I need you in my arms
come home.
End.
By Heaven'sSpear
Hi,
absolutely beautiful song, your voice is really awesome. So much to bring a lot of feeling into a song is not easy! Respect and 5 * from me.
Greetings
Christian
I agree with StoneFace about your style and voice. I like the dark ambience you're creating. Awesome song.
There are two things I'd like to suggest:
- What about using a real guitar instead of that somewhat artificial sounding distorted rhythm guitar?
- I think there's a little lack of bass at least in some parts of the song and makes it less powerful as it could be. (Not sure of that, but I'd have a try)
Hey HeavensSpears.
Very good music. You have a very fine feeling in the song and music.
And it is not happynes, if you can`t see the one you love.
Keep gooing.
Claus
Gruß
I love the FX on the intro vocal track(something we don't hear enough of in this forum). Your attention to detail is par excellence. If you follow this path in all aspects of your life then it is no wonder that you are experienceing that rarest of all human gifts,True Love.
Fantastico! 
Una canción con mucha calidad. La voz me ha gustado mucho.
Un trabajo sin duda de 5*
Saludos.
Javier