Hi, thanks for the notice of your new music; This seemed to me a modern opera, this was the impression he gave me, it would be for the laughter of the male voice and perhaps for the long 'la-ra, la-ran, la-rare ...' of your voice; I must say that this seems a much more serious work, here we can see the interest in maintaining the rhythm and with it the intensity, it is like a work of experience, it can be said that there is a good intensity that comes from everywhere, but in the Music instruments are based on other instruments and the main voice can rely on other voices, here I am going to leave a direct link of a choir that matches or resembles your voice, if you look at that chorus you can hear the same voice Which is repeated three times, possibly was looped over another loop and possibly delayed the time of one of them to give the chorus feel or gave the chorus effect in the effects section; The lyrics of this musical theme are sadly and truly true; I think the voice is very good, but you must gain more experience with the plans, there are times when the music surpasses the main voice, and other times when the voice of laughter interferes and is not placed in the background as it should be, Likewise your voice interferes with the main voice, give each thing its place, which is foreground and background, so there are no conflicts of quality.

In the boxes on the left of the etidor or your DAW of music if you click on FX you will see different options or effect, choose 'main voice of the theme', in that line you must put the voices that are going to be main, voices Secondary you must put them in another line and give them another effect, prove that.

I recognize that you have gained in experience and that you have a clear intension of giving a use to what you naturally have, continue along that path of self-satisfaction, that gives harmony because you feel useful (And I want to congratulate you for that).

The link to the choir on Looperman (it's free)