That's an excellent composition...Ciggi Burns has indeed beautiful vocals..

For the areas of improvement I hear some crackle here and there such as 00:40 it is too obvious, further I suggest to try putting slight reverb on the vocals...

I take the liberty to put the lyrics of this wonderful track for other friends..

QUEEN OF THE CROWS

I flew to a great land that was strange to me
With humid heat, white sand and turquoise sea.
In an air-cooled room I slept, troubled in my mind
Until mellow morning gold filtered through the blind.
Above me I heard claws, the sound of raucous cries
Looking out I saw a murder of crows gilded by sunrise.

They fed on black velvet moths, drowsy from the night
Death’s prelude a rustle of feathers and sharp beak’s bite.
As one the crows’ heads turned and they stared at me
All at once I felt trapped inside and ached to be free.

I left my bed of dreams and went down to the street
Something small caught the sun and sparkled at my feet.
I stooped and placed a heart-shaped diamond in my palm
A tall stranger told me: “I can break the riddle of that charm.”

I knew the answer already – my future - why I was here
But I needed the warmth of the stranger and held him near.
He woke to find me gone, a feather beside him on the bed
Brushing the quill along his cheek, he knew he’d been misled.

I was flying fast and high, infinity at my finger tips
Velvet moth and dazzling diamond held between my lips.
For I am the Queen of the Crows

Fantastic music .... and integration.

For your information, we created CiggiBurns and me, this song some time ago. You can find it on the site you downloaded this a capella.

You did a great job ....
 

Hello Joaquin !

Very interesting Collaboration !!   bravo    5**

Regards, Patrick

sehr schöner song

gruss dieter

Hallo Joaquin, Toller Wunderbare Song! Herzlichen Gruß Joachim!

sehr guter Gesang und schöne Musik,Sound ist auch ok!

l.G

Sascha

Hört sich recht lieb an -:Tolle Idee -:Gefällt mir!

YaraLove

Hola Joaquin,

I do not like the crows are evil beasts... But the music is great and the voice beautiful 5*

Greetings, Olivier

buen trabajo,una balada muy bonita,enhora buena

tienes un talento innato para crear bellas composicionees orchestrales

para los cantantes

 muy buena cancion

Muy buen trabajo Joaquin.