Appologies for a late visit and having missed out on a lovely present, I like the lyrics but may be the vocals need a bot of more authority to the slow paced BPM. A further suggestion is to perhaps use a bit of equalizer on the higher frequencies to take out the dominant hissing sound which appears time and again..all in all very good song.
...das gehauche am anfang find ich sehr sexy......das teil hier kommt (seit längerem mal wieder) sehr bowie-mäßig...nich nur vom gesang, sondern speziell von der mucke her...ist dir superschön gelungen, das stück... *fav*