Hey edub,

guter Sound!

Gefällt mir und inspiriert mich!

G Siggi

Two great qualities of this song are the beat and all the keyboard parts.

There is only one thing I would change. The really high-pitch synth might sound better an octave lower.

5* for this song, and good luck with the concept album!

I agree with Sprite
but I have to add that I think it is a
good song..I like the dark mood of it in the beginning

Quite interesting, perhaps a review on overall mix may be done to bring a balance in the final outcome, some parts appear to be too busy and some areas too subdued.

All the best for your album.