Don't know what was up with the last post, but it didn't seem to work for some reason. Anyway, never done any sort of music creation before. Played guitar in me teens a little bit. Be honest about your opinions folks.
Liked the groove! Overall it was a fun composition, my only suggestions would revolve around the technical side. may be the headphones I was using but I heard some clipping on various tracks, need to keep the levels out of the red. The bass and drum tracks seemed just a little to powerful for the nice melody you have in the background.
The ending is abrupt, on purpose? I would have preferred a slow fade.
Other than that I would say this is a great "first creation".