My Heart

allguitars wrote on 5/27/2010, 3:59 PM
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Trying to produce a Romantic Soulful Ballad based on a piano riff with a heart beat bass line and using as little guitar as possible a suggestion from a friend who said no guitar (being a guitarist this was extremely difficult) as you can hear I managed to slip in a little guitar riff. I have tried to produce a groove between bass and drums, a suggestion some of the other guys made based on my last production. I do listen to your comments and take them on board. I had to construct the bass line by shortening existing samples and cutting and pasteing this made the timing difficult although I think I did ok. I will leave that to your judgement. My Heart is there for you to listen to, hope you like it.             Regards  Al

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ArtistW wrote on 5/27/2010, 6:04 PM

It is a nice song but I have two minus points:
1e The piano-riff reminds me to much of that from: "jessie" (from Joshua Kadison); 
2e I do not like the Sample-voice.

Spartano wrote on 5/28/2010, 2:43 AM
Ich Finde deine Musik Klasse, ok die Vokals Soundpools hat man hier schon sehr oft gehört, aber es passt zu deine Musik! 5* Herzlichen Gruß dein Musikfreund Joachim!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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siggi_s wrote on 5/28/2010, 4:26 PM
Hey,

sehr schön!

Hat aber noch Luft nach oben!

Sehr gut!

G siggi
Lehar wrote on 5/29/2010, 12:52 PM
... unfortunately, I must agree with ArtistW, the song is arranged very nicely, but vocal does not harmonize anyhow with the rest. One also expects another song, with the beautiful piano part. But if it is for you OK, it is level OK.
But otherwise a really successful song.



Regards
Lehar
datamix wrote on 6/3/2010, 9:54 PM
a mi me ha gustado , creo que lo unico que sacaria es el pad, demsiado largo y desluce la voz
pero el arreglo es bueno