Hi Furkan,

I'm from Germany and I would like to comment a few things about your song, but I don't know whether your and my English is good enough to explain the technical things, and if you would understand it. So I am making a suggestion - I have a turkish friend and he will translate my comment into turkish and after that, I will contact you again, ok?
But basicly the theme of your song is a good idea and I'm sure, you will get much more out of it! And because of your age - respect!

regards
Lehar