Hi Billy,

I'm not the greatest metal fan, but I've listened to some metal tracks and went to a metal concert last year.

What you should improve is the mix. I mainly hear the chord guitar playing its chords. What I would like to hear more is the other guitar with the riffs (or however to call it - as I said before, I'm not an expert in this genre).

The song has too dominant highs and too weak lows (maybe it's because I listened the song on my laptop), but try to improve it, that it sounds great on any device ;)

I hope I was able to help you