PATIENT-X wrote on 9/8/2023, 10:39 PM
Tags: Pop, Synthpop

This is my new pop song, i created tonight, enjoy the music and the energy.

Das ist mein neuer Popsong, den ich heute Abend kreiert habe. Genieße die Musik und spüre die Energie.


I want to feel the wind on my hair
I want to feel the sun on my skin
I want to savour this moment
I want to be like here again
and want you lying there beside me
But instead i am chasing the rhythm
while i fall asleep
I keep on dancing till i fall
chasing the rhythm
I want to look into your eyes
I want to have some things to say
Instead i am chasing the rhythm to my dying day
please dont be away when i fade away.

repeated three times
I keep dancing till i fall

chasing the rhythm

I want to look into your eyes


Ich möchte den Wind auf meinen Haaren spüren
Ich möchte die Sonne auf meiner Haut spüren
Ich möchte diesen Moment genießen
Ich möchte wieder so sein wie hier
und möchte, dass du neben mir liegst
Aber stattdessen jage ich dem Rhythmus
während ich einschlafe
Ich tanze weiter, bis ich falle
dem Rhythmus nachjagen
Ich möchte in deine Augen schauen
Ich möchte ein paar Dinge sagen
Stattdessen jage ich dem Rhythmus meines Todestages nach
Bitte bleib nicht weg, wenn ich verschwinde.

dreimal wiederholt
Ich tanze weiter, bis ich umfalle, und jage dem Rhythmus nach

Ich möchte in deine Augen schauen

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Friedrich Nietzsche: "Without music, life would be a mistake."

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Jinty wrote on 9/9/2023, 1:09 AM

Hello Stephen,

You have created a wonderful track, Excellent work!!!!!!!!!

All the best,


Ryo wrote on 9/9/2023, 2:24 AM

very nice


franco-galateo wrote on 9/9/2023, 2:43 AM

great energy.. sound and vocal of the good quality.. track exellent


Siggi-M wrote on 9/9/2023, 3:07 AM

A very nice song, Stephen. I particularly liked the lyrics. 👌 ❤️.


KWH001 wrote on 9/9/2023, 3:43 AM

Das ist schon echte Profiarbeit und geht schon in Richtung Radiomusik .... :D

LG Klaus

Jochen-S wrote on 9/9/2023, 8:19 AM

Hi Stephen,
Great song with a lot of energy...also very well done in terms of arrangement ...
Greetings and cheers 👍🍺🍺👍 ...

Guitar_Smurf wrote on 9/9/2023, 9:57 AM

Hello Stephen,

beautiful pop song with romantic lyrics (love song ! ?) great work and thank you for the german translation a❤️

Cheers my friend....Bert

Paolo-Brenner wrote on 9/10/2023, 5:39 PM

Perfekter Discosound der 80er - habe es genossen!!! wrote on 9/10/2023, 6:00 PM

Sehr schön - Gefällt mir sehr - 💯😇💯😉 - Gerne gehört -

Vio-Project wrote on 9/12/2023, 1:36 PM

A very nice pop song with great vocals! I feel positive energy, get in a good mood and feel like dancing. Very good composition, Stephen! 👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯💯👌👌👌👌👌👑👑👑👑👑

Best wishes and greetings from Sylvio 😎