Lost (Rap)

Picnicboy wrote on 7/13/2022, 2:26 AM
Tags: Hip-Hop, Rap, MIDI

Moinsen tosamm.

Hab nen sehr melodiösen Rap anzubieten heuddde.

Ihr wollt immer den Text dazu... menno... 😅...is immer so viel Schreiberei.😂 Abba na gut... da isser:

In the World there are Millions of people in love, the most have bad luck.

The top love is spoken to someone else, no chance to win.

Heartache makes no sense, so what can you do but crying?

...love is a war 2x

1. love is a beautiful emotion but there is no guarantee for an answer of the loved one, of the chosen one.

everything can happen, you must be the knight in the night with your silver armour

touching with words the heart of your chosen one. until it´s done and you win the lonely heart.

Hook: i´m lost in love, i´m lost in you

you steal my heart, of you i´m a part

you have changed my mind

2. millions of people fall in love every day and how many at last can say: I LOVE YOU!?!?

good luck, this are enough. there are so many lucky people in the world.

ain´t that nice?

3. the greatest failure is to try it in the wrong mood, in an ugly suite

if there are no emotions in your heart and you only make a try, then you will cry.

but if love is talking over your mouth and your chosen one is lucky with you

having a great time, words without slime

then you have a good chance to win


Ok, das is der Text dazu. So, nu viel Spaß beim Hören und ich bin gespannt wie der bei euch ankommt.

LG, Pic😎


SEA-K wrote on 7/13/2022, 3:07 AM

Hi Pic,

That is what I call Great Rap Good Music. And Hip-Hop should only be this cool. Loved It. Very Well Done and said. (Chorus is a bit inaudible but text helped) Best regards CHRIS

Picnicboy wrote on 7/13/2022, 3:09 AM

@SEA-K Thx a lot for this little Tip. I made the Hook louder, but it seems not enough. Ok, now I know.

Siggi-M wrote on 7/13/2022, 3:22 AM

Moin Pic, das machst Du echt gut 💯. Richtig gute saubere Arbeit 👌👌👌👌👌💪.

Gruß Siggi...

Former user wrote on 7/13/2022, 5:51 AM

Hi Pic,

Der Rap ist Klasse geworden, Melo ist super. Gefällt mir sehr gut!

LG Gerd

Mark_MERIX wrote on 7/13/2022, 10:15 AM


Was ist mit deiner Sommerpause?

Gut arrangiert. Stimme klingt ein wenig wie "Yello" im Refrain. Solltest du drauf aufbauen ... . 💪

LG - Mark 😀😀

Picnicboy wrote on 7/13/2022, 10:38 AM

@Mark_MERIX Jaaaa die Sommerpause is noch wat hin wie´s aussieht. Touris sind da, abba nich genuch Umsatz um dauernd raus zu fahren. Von daher hab ich hier und da Zeit für Mukke. Hoffe der große Run kommt noch.

Guitar_Smurf wrote on 7/14/2022, 1:06 AM

Hi Pic,

...würde ja auch gerne bei dir mal ma´ meckern, finde aber nix😂,toller Rap (HipHop)... Sound absolut perfekt...wünsche dir im "Einmannvelobetrieb" viel Erfolg.


Chri_sTo wrote on 7/14/2022, 2:25 AM


franco-galateo wrote on 7/14/2022, 4:51 AM

good .. track with exellent sound... voices and liric good . very well


hildegard-beister wrote on 7/14/2022, 11:55 AM

Hi Pic,

wie SUPER ist das denn........... Dein Akzent ist so süß, sehr gerne gehört.👌 🙌 

LG, Hildegard

APMC. wrote on 7/14/2022, 5:51 PM

I liked the chorus Pic'$$$$....very good. something rather gloomy coming out of some medieval castle in the shadow of bright moonlit clouds. I liked it because of that, my like is the 5th element.

Vio-Project wrote on 7/15/2022, 1:31 PM

Echt top Sound, schöne Melodie und klasse Rap! Danke auch für die Textbeigabe - der Text ist auch sehr gut!


LG Sylvio 😎

Talan wrote on 7/15/2022, 3:01 PM

Moin Pic,

Rap hast Du also auch drauf. Ja der Song ist wirklich gut und kreativ, dass gefällt mir.

Grüße Peter