Lonely bird

kat.schmidt Posté à 05/03/2017 00:51
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Hi,

yes, it was a long break... say we so I was in the winter-sleep... but slowly its time to wake up... and start and present something new ... I hope somebody of you will like this! When I have done this song I thought it has something ... but you also should not forget, please, that I'm not really singing... sound yes, I was also remembering at some advices and tried to follow them by instruction of some of you... . Just sometimes I thougt it is too silent somehow, because of this, I have done some parts louder - and now, I think maybe some parts are too loud ... ok listen at first and please say what you think about. I have also another versions in which some parts are more silent. The English text I tried to write this time myself, it mightbe not perfect but I tried to do the best. I quite much like the song. My husband said, it is a kind of Electro Rock. He and my 5 years old son like this song a lot... Write please your comments if you want...

best regards

Kat

p.s. my brand new michrofon is still on the postway to me... but I cannot without singing, i feel that I like it, sorry)) because of this I have sung again without an extern microphone.

 

Lonely bird

Lonley bird in the sky, you*re flying so high,

you*re knowing your way

to your home far away,

you are not looking in past, you*re flying so fast,

you're so free and so great, love and not any hate.

 

aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

We are people with pain, we can't love, we're afraid,

higher price should be paid for to live with the hate,

for to live with the hate, for to live with the hate. .

 

aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Commentaires

nafets. Posté à 05/03/2017 09:29

ansich nicht schlecht,etwas zu viel hall im gesang würd ich sagen und mehr mittig hät ich Deinen gesang

gesetzt....an einigen stellen übersteuert Dein gesang,mit der taste "M" kannst Du den Mixer öffnen,falls Du das nicht schon weist ....dort die level der spuren im auge behalten....wenn es ins rote ausschlägt,dann übersteuert der gesang o.ä.

es wäre schon sinnvoll mit einem vernünftigen microfon einzusingen.....dann brauchst Du auch nicht mehr so viel am sound dessen rumschrauben....mir persönlich zu viel effekt drauf auf Deinem gesang

sehr lobenswert,dass Du selber singen willst,nur müsste dies noch qualitativ besser sein (gutes Equipment-Micro)

okay,Du schreibst ja das es noch auf dem postweg ist....bin gespannt auf die meinungen der anderen musiker hier

meine ehrliche meinung und meine das nicht bös ☺️

lg stefan

MW73 Posté à 05/03/2017 17:34

Oh Oh etwas sehr schräg

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 05/03/2017 18:20

Sincerely I liked the use of voice, you must pay attention because the voice is slightly broken or has too much delay, you must choose another delay that does not make those clicks at the end of the voice track, in some track it went well , In others not. I have listened to this musical theme five times and in the end I found what is missing: Your voice looks powerful and you are holding it, you are using only the middle of your throat and the top that escapes through the nose, dare to use the bottom of your throat, there were parts in this music that demanded it, so you would have reached a Maximum point of expression and show 'lonely bird' as in his state of loneliness and tear, that requires that you live the character, also, it matters a lot all the feelings of personal life that are related, if you do not behave as an actor you can not have a show; Do not forget the music, it corresponds to her the other 100% of success; that was good, truly.

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 05/03/2017 18:34

...The comments and support that come from your husband and son are only the support of people who have feelings and lives linked to you, they will tell the truth, but they are not the public, the energy they give you alone is useful for you to maintain and Enjoy what you are doing, you must support yourself in your criteria, listen to a lot of music that you would like to do, listen to Youtube 'america got talent' and 'X factor' and draw conclusions from the voices you listen, strive to acquire those skills Expression of voice, see what judges look for in those new talents, that way you increase your view of yourself and you can differentiate between what is support and what is the appreciation of your art, greetings.

Solista Posté à 05/03/2017 20:05

Das ist jetzt schon arg "abenteuerlich", um's mal so zu sagen. Vocals großteils zu laut und viel zu viel Hall.
Aber was ich am Beunruhigsten finde: Der Gesang hat wenig Zusammenhang zum Sountrack und der in der Schlusspassage deutlicher werdende Bass (Bb) klingt schon sehr schräg im Verhältnis zum Gesang und den Gitarrenakkorden (Am, G, Dm). Da krümmen sich bei mir etwas die Ohrmuscheln.

Den Text finde ich gut. 🙂

franco-galateo Posté à 06/03/2017 09:59

i appreciate this song, job compositional cool!!

franco

smartsmurf Posté à 06/03/2017 22:43

Let's say it like Solista...

The lyrics are really good... I like them. 😀

 

Music here is an experiment... 😶

kat.schmidt Posté à 10/03/2017 20:48

Hi, everybody

ok now, I have time to answer shortly ... so to say I see that at some parts I should  "take a punch" )) (hope it is right in englisch)  

at first thanks at all for all attenntion... for advices... But yes, it was like an experiment also for me.. i have built this song especcially so like you have heard ... . And  I can very good imagine how the same song can be other built... but really I wantet it especcially SO! ... I just wantet to do something other and not an usual rock song... at the second as I've sung... yeah may be it is not perfect...  I see it realistic with my voice.. I don't think to sing as main character at the Opera :) but I neverless will try to do further also try to sing... this is not my wish this is the wish of my soul))

 have a nice weekend U all

Kat

tingel Posté à 22/04/2017 18:50

Hey Kat, ein wirklich schöner Text und auch wenn Deine vocals etwas laut und viel reverb drauf ist... finde ich die Idee zu der Musik gut und gerade weil es ja kein schönes Ende ist vom Text und wir Menschen ja wirklich so schräg sind... hast Du in meinen Augen das richtige getan.. ich sehe es wie ein Bild... lg Andi

fpescobedo Posté à 25/04/2017 06:46

It's important to create what YOU like. If you like it, do it!!!

Pat_02 Posté à 24/07/2017 12:34

Salut mon amie Kat,

Je suis quelqu'un de sincère et là, je vais t'avouer que je pars dans le sens des paroles de notre ami Bendizu.

Mais mon propre ressenti va être un peu plus dur et j'en suis désolé, mais il faut être honnête, la musique je l'aime, pas de problème, car en général je ne suis jamais déçu par tes compositions très originales et qui sortent du lot comme je dis, mais c'est au niveau de la voix que ça ne va pas du tout, et j'en suis plus qu'étonné d'ailleurs, car je t'ai entendu chanter mieux que çà dans d'autres de tes musiques.

C'est surtout au niveaux des vocalises que ça ne va pas, elles sonnent très faut, et que ce soit tes vocalises ou ton chant, tout cela est très "mou" je dirais, par rapport à ta musique qui est plus remuante, alors cela donne un effet bizarre qui n'est malheureusement pas à mon goût, mais je le précise encore, seulement pour le chant, car la musique j'aime bien.

Voila mon ressenti Kat, donc il y a un très gros travail à faire pour le chant, désolé encore une fois de te dire cela, mais comme dit Bendizu, l'avis de ton époux et de tes enfants c'est une choses, mais le ressenti et l'avis qui en découle d'auditeurs extérieurs est tout autre.

Alors ! au travail mon ami pour améliorer considérablement ce chant qui n'est vraiment pas digne de toi ayant entendu beaucoup mieux que çà dans tes autres musiques et chansons.

(J'espère que mes paroles seront bien traduites par Google)

Courage et mes amitiés.

Patrick