hello Fdp58, this work shown here is a good one, your effort is noted, it seems to me that if it had introduced more changes do not give the feeling of being a linear musical theme, you must find more variants for that not to happen, when I say variants I mean changes in tone or desentonos if necessary and depending on your taste as creator, of course, if you publish it means it is a final product, but it is not always that way, I also have done and has happened recognized that suggestions are important, of course, if they are understandable and comprehensible, without more, wanting to help, bendizu