Against Relentless Wind

SpriteBat wrote on 5/29/2010, 3:24 AM
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Album: Grand Adventures

All original, composed with synth and beatbox. All lyrics and vocals by me.

I have been working on this for a long time. I think I got the first inspiration at least 3 years ago. In fact, it might have been inspired by the song "Knights of Cydonia" by Muse, but I don't remember.

Thanks for listening, and I hope you like it (sorry about my low quality microphone used to record vocals). Picture is from google.

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Spartano wrote on 5/29/2010, 4:01 AM
Leider Höre ich dein Gesang viel zu Leise! Die Musik ist Klasse!
Herzlichen Gruß dein Musikfreund Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Lehar wrote on 5/29/2010, 5:51 AM
I know, indeed, you have pointed out us to it, but the quality of your Micro influences too much the hearing pleasure of your great musical adventure! I can produce no connection between lyrics and music, and only of the emotional description of the music, I'm able, as well as your contents, to  anticipate, what just happens in the song! This is a great pity. It is in such a way, as if you consider yourself a picture in the fog. Of course the music also already has a great soundtrack character without your vocals, in company by your contents description! Vividly, full of suspense, musical situation descriptions, however, it is a great pity  around the work which you have invested, one cannot appreciate them enough! All in all, own composition, idea, conversion, the desire in listening, all these are worth it to me, nevertheless, four stars!


Ich weiß, Du hast uns darauf hingewiesen, aber die Qualität Deines Micro beeinflusst zu sehr das Hörvergnügen Deines großartigen musikalischen Abenteuers. Ich kann keine Verbindung zwischen Text und Musik herstellen und nur aufgrund Deiner Inhaltsbeschreibung, sowie der musikalischen Emtionalität, bin ich in der Lage zu ahnen, was gerade im Lied so passiert! Es ist, als ob Du Dir ein Bild durch einen Nebelschleier betrachtest. Natürlich hat die Musik auch ohne Deinen Gesang, in Verbindung mit Deiner Inhaltsbeschreibung bereits einen tollen Soundtrack-Charakter - lebendig, spannend, musikalische Situationsbeschreibungen - aber es ist schade, dass ich dadurch Deine ganze Arbeit nicht entsprechend würdigen kann. !

Greeting
Lehar
Guitorb wrote on 5/30/2010, 6:25 AM
 I think this story/song would appeal to anyone who is actually doing anything worthwhile and encountering a "relentless wind". Sometimes in the form of overt pressure,i.e. a boss or supervisor. Sometimes covert,i.e. well meaning loved ones who fear for our well being or reputation.
 Another excellent composition from you!
ArtistW wrote on 5/30/2010, 4:50 PM
I think the instrumental part is very good but the vocal part can better. Nevertheless for the whole work 5* and FAV


P.S. I think a male choir could be very interesting (sorry I do not have one).