Now, the idea is really good, only you have put with the conversion primarily the rap genre in the foreground, particularly as you name the Flamengo in your title first! The applause, which goes over into the Flamengo-Clap has succeeded very well, as well as the intro. Then, however, merely one rhythm chord, played in a continuously single sound step, takes over the main melody of the Flamengorythm (that's not enough, for the whole song)! There comes that you allow to dominate the song without any interruption of the Rapvocals and female choir. Indeed, the Rapvocals have a good mastering, but exactly here, because they are not dependent on a sound step, I would have varied the acoustic guitar in the sound step (1+2, or 1+5)! Instead of the women's choir I would have substituted for this with diverse Flamengorythms (claps and castanets for example), so that the listener, how by the title is wanted, is pushed musically by a genre into the other. Nevertheless, the Flamengosamples offer a huge number of possibilities. The bases of the rap are beats and just rap and of Flamengo, guitar, claps and castanets!
To finish the song with a fade-out, unfortunately, is very inappropriate, particularly the song begins with a live applause! I would have used him after the last guitar tone or Flamengo-Clap and then allow to fade out the applause!
Unfortunately, the flamengopart in this song is for me too little and so I refrains to value him, in the hope that you rework the song over again. Since the idea has earned a reworking anyway!
Regards
Lehar
Former user
wrote on 6/16/2010, 3:07 AM
lehar, i see what you are saying my friend and i am reworking this track,n and to honest the way you described is about how it is getting reworked