@David-Godfray

Hi

Personally, I must agree with @ReefHound , there are too many transitions which, IMO, distract from the story you are trying to tell.

Additionally I feel the images, need putting into context, ie some text or narration giving location, history, time etc or describing how they relate to the subject matter.

There is a potential issue which you may not be aware of - Copyright and Trade Mark laws - the ITV logo/Ident is likely to be subjected to both and the music used in the video subject to Copyright , if so, you should have permission to use them for what is generally called 'Public Broadcasting', ie not for for private use/viewing.

Hopefully we will see more examples of your work and if you have any questions about using MEP, how to do something or where to obtain free resources then please do not hesitate to ask.

Moderators hat on:- Please note the forum has its own section for uploading your creations for demonstration purposes, commenting etc the link is Media at the top of the page and it will automatically load your creations whether video, images or music to the correct categories of the Media section.

Happy editting

John EB