I like the bulding and its a cool Bassline...
DJ Sanderson says, the melody is a little bit weak, thats right in my opinion.
And i find the HiHat in the Drums at the beginning an in the middle at 2:30 sounds a little bit tinny...
But your Breaks and trasitions are awesome work ...specially the other melody in the middle and outro part is very beatiful...i like it ..