BABY'S LULLABY

eirianlys wrote on 9/1/2009, 6:34 PM
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Title: lullaby
Artists: baby

WRITTEN AND SUNG BY VINCE HUGHES.
lyrics by Mary McGrath
REECORDED ON A HOME DIGITAL STUDIO,

the lyrics:

I CRY A TEAR AS I WATCH YOU SLEEP
AND WITH EVERY BREATH MY LOVE GROWS DEEP.
I SEE YOUR FACE AS YOU DREAM CONTENT
BABY YOU'LL NEVER KNOW YOUR HEAVEN SENT.

I THANK THE LORD FOR THIS SPECIAL GIFT
AND WHAT WE SHARE EVERYDAY WE LIVE.
IT FEELS SO NEW LIKE SOFT WARM LIGHT.
I WANT TO HOLD YOU EVERY DAY AND NIGHT

I'LL KEEP YOU CLOSE, HERE INSIDE MY HEART
WHEN I'M WITH YOU OR IF WE'RE APART.
YOU GIVE ME MORE THAN ANY WORDS CAN SAY
AND WHAT IT'S WORTH TO LIVE EACH DAY.

IT'S HARD FOR ME TO SAY HOW I FEEL
DEEP DOWN IT'S LOVE, AND I KNOW IT'S REAL

I THANK THE LORD FOR THIS SPECIAL GIFT
AND WHAT WE SHARE EVERYDAY WE LIVE.
IT FEELS SO NEW LIKE SOFT WARM LIGHT.
I WANT TO HOLD YOU EVERY DAY AND NIGHT

WRITTEN BY Mary Mcgrath




 

Comments

Former user wrote on 9/2/2009, 7:52 AM
a very nice text with a good voice and  musical fram...


b.g.

Hartmut
Frantzi wrote on 9/2/2009, 3:09 PM
Great lyrics in a good instrumental version...
the changing of the harmonys is very well done...
but, the mastering is not, what I would prefer...
Nevertheless 5*
Franz

Please choose your cover better...
Rana wrote on 9/3/2009, 12:29 AM
Overall a good presentation, however, I will take away a star on the grounds of overall mix of vocals with the arpeggio, may be a little more attention on mastering can fix it. Cover relation to the theme is ???? 
ArtistW wrote on 9/4/2009, 6:08 PM
On the technical side there is probably room for improvement but I like the musical side a lot. 5*