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datamix wrote on 11/23/2010, 11:24 PM

Hello
do you become absorbed in the first chords?, very beautiful indeed
But must now build a melody that accompanies those chords,
you spend a little more time
good start
datamix

Spartano wrote on 11/24/2010, 1:12 AM

Eine Sehr schöne Musik, aber hier muss du denn Rhythmus auch mal Ändern, und auch noch eine schöne Melodie Hinzufügen,

Bin mir sicher das du das Schaffst,

Herzlichen Gruß Spartano! 

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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smartsmurf wrote on 11/24/2010, 2:16 PM

Playing around is always the beginning...

 

Don't be afraid to take further steps.

 

no vote for a play-around

Photohansel wrote on 12/6/2010, 1:10 PM

Ich stimme SPARTANO zu...

Liebe Grüsse

Photohansel

ouesanto wrote on 6/21/2011, 2:48 PM

relaxant !!  

Former user wrote on 11/13/2014, 11:40 PM

Hi Jenner:

This is a sweet tune, with wonderful, melodic chords.  However, I agree with many of the comments from datamix.  Perhaps an earlier entry with a melody?  Personally, I am not in the business of actually "criticizing" another musician's work, but please take my observations as a mere suggestion. 

The overall body of this piece has a wealth of potential; based upon the opening bars,,, 

Please view this as a 'constructive' review. 

Take care...

griff