I like this techno piece. I noticed that the same musical pattern, note wise, was running through the whole song. Adding a little high end synth in spots in the song would break up the monotony (sameness) and would push this song over the top. Adding something like strings, mallots/bells, or movement synth in 4 to 8 measure intervals periodically would give this a big boost.

You've done an excellent job here Cornsy. You have a potential hit! 4*

nihon94 wrote on 12/6/2014, 10:12 AM

It is good

nihon94

Former user wrote on 12/6/2014, 10:41 AM

Hallo , .. "

Sehr gute Musik und da wo die Drum´s spielen , könnte ein Rythmuswechsel ..( Drum ) ..

mehr sein !?

Gruß Andreas

4****+

Jinty wrote on 12/6/2014, 12:27 PM

Hi Alan,

Cool track, well done!!!!!!!

All the nest,

Jan....

kam937 wrote on 12/6/2014, 12:51 PM

the theme has a good development and good transitions. I liked

TetleyAnderton wrote on 12/6/2014, 11:46 PM

I like it.

TetleyAnderton wrote on 12/6/2014, 11:46 PM

I like it.

gerrycix wrote on 12/7/2014, 4:38 AM

Great version ...Alan !

Very good track and mix ,

Ciao David

Cruiseflash wrote on 12/7/2014, 7:15 AM

Hi, very interesting music I listen there. reminds me of the soundtrack from the movie: Kevin & Perry. These were two guys who wanted to take on Ibiza in the club foot. Nicely done, I like very much. Greetings and nice christmas by Ralf

Former user wrote on 12/7/2014, 7:53 AM

Hi Cornsy:

Strong piece of music here. A great wake-up call. It certainly grabs your attention, man!

Griff

info4u2 wrote on 12/7/2014, 10:55 AM

This style of music is not generally to my taste however I found the sound overall pleasant on the ear. The intro had verity and kept me interested although the end section became very repetitive but still easy on the ear. Overall the track was uplifting and very difficult to sit down to without tapping ones foot or noddy ones head to the rhythm.

On a personal note: I have learnt not to judge my own work, firstly because I to close to it, secondly I did the best with the limited talent and tools at my disposal at the time and thirdly and more importantly because I am creating it for others listen to and judge. My brain knows what I am trying to achieve but I find quite often I cannot translate it in to reality exactly but I have learnt to except my best results and to share that and move on to the next adventure. Reality is always imperfect!

Remember there is no accounting for taste so what you think is an average track others think it is great

Your track was well executed

Well done

Indigo

cybertibor wrote on 12/8/2014, 11:32 AM

Hi cornsy2008!

I'm in a good mood today to enjoy this style! Very good. So 4 ^^

Kind regards,

Tibor

Former user wrote on 12/9/2014, 4:57 PM

Hola Cornsy,Buen sonido,aunque no es el tipo de Techno de mi agrado esta pieza,cierto es que en su momento aportaria una danza caliente.Un saludo

Farstom wrote on 12/11/2014, 4:46 AM

well done

but you can do more .

jorgejerzy wrote on 12/13/2014, 6:03 AM

Techno ist nicht die Musik, die ich favorisiere.

Darum kann ich dazu, als Nicht-Techno-Freak, nur sagen, dass die Musik technisch sehr gut klingt,

aber vom Aufbau her eine ständige Wiederholung ist. Mußt das bei Techno so sein ? Wenn ja, dann ist das ein guter Titel.

Auf jeden Fall habe ich mir das gerne angehört.

Gruß

Georg(e)

stuallan wrote on 3/9/2015, 11:18 AM

Hi Alan,

Overall I liked this a lot. Well developed synth sounds, could use a few additional instruments to add a bit of variety.

Godd stuff!

Best Regards,

Stu

ballabarr wrote on 6/4/2015, 11:57 AM

3 words I LOVE IT well done