There is a history to all music and that being said, I will tell you the background of this particular track.
My brother purchased the Magix Music Maker a year before I did and is actually the true creator of the sound of it. Of course he lost his steam and never finished it to the full potential (yes, it runs in the faimily, apparently) or made any other tracks, so I adopted it, transformed it and made it into what is today.
That being said, I will now address the shortness of it, as I know as much as anyone... this is only the beginning. I've come up with several additions with different musical "textures", but they aren't wrapped into the whole composition just yet.
I'm still learning about this musical program and am slowly, but steadily, making some progress to understand the functions of all that I can alter, change and so on with the loops I currently have.
I appreciate all of your feedback very much and am with hope that soon I'll be able to create a sound worthy piece - with proper timing and ending, no doubt - that is able to appease the ears and minds of all.
I hope you enjoy.