not my favorite kind of music, but I appreciate your compositional work

franco

hallo martin,

ich kann kein engl. lesen und so weiter,

jedoch finde ich diesen soundtrack für eine gelungene sache, da wo er, in welches stück auch immer passt.

also mir gefällt er ausgezeichnet.

passt zu vielen sachen im filmgeschäft, denn da habe ich schon schlimmeres gehört.

v.g.

Hartmut

Sounds like a great effort to me Martin.  Norbert's suggestions seem solid to me, if you want to bring a bit more impact into the mix.  Not that I can claim to be any sort of expert about mixes.

Now I am sitting here with my headphones on - ah...a bassline!

I especially like the low frequency constant bass, that fits extremely well to the theme set by the instruments.

So, bass is there but could still use more pressure (my own feeling only, mate).

Still, the whole track composition is really nicely done.

Norbert

Hi Martin,

I happened to see an entry of yours on someone's guestbook page that I was leaving an entry on and decided to stop by and listen to some of your contributions.  If I may...offer a few suggestions as well:

You have a great start here...very impressive.  First, after you break everything down, at about :53 in, maybe try switching your drum rhythm...similar funky beat, but just a slightly different variation.  Carry it through to 1:12.  At  1:12 into the song, add in 4 straight bass drum kick beats, then at 1:15,  bring your original drum beat back in HEAVY and maybe add a little more synth to fill-in and give it more depth where depth is missing.  These are just my suggestions.

It's all about drawing the listener into the core of your song.  When you play your song back...close your eyes and listen to it.  You will hear and feel exactly where you want you music to build, and where you want it to impact the listener.  I like what you have done so far.  This is going to be great once you get it finished.

Well Done.

Brenda

It honestly sounds pretty good to me. The beat is simple but it works with everything else and it never gets boring. One thing I personally would change is the deep, rumbling synth-bass sounds. I think it's good for short sections but perhaps if it keeps going too long it ends up more like white noise. That's just me though; I noticed that Norbert says just the opposite.

Whatever you may change, I look forward to hearing the next version.

Hallo Martin,

Gute,  Rock Musik,

sehr gerne angehört,

lg, von Joachim.

Well done bro!!!  As a drummer, I would have put in more variety with the kick; some doubles and triples to funk it up and make it bounce a bit more, which a piece like this deserves.  Overall, I love it though.  You're doing great work man!!!