I think for home making is the mix ok.

It`s a good work.

The voices with the effects are a little overload, but this is my personal opinion.

LG
Olli/M-V-F

Hi Lori,

du spielst schon eine doch recht "ungewöhnliche" Musikrichtung. Das ist keine Kritik, denn ich liebe es, wenn die Leute kreativ sind und sich im Song mal so richtig gehen lassen können. Ganz Frei von irgendwelchen Zwängen, keine Vorgaben in der musikalischen Richtung.

Schön gemacht,

L.G.

Jens

Mix is much better not perfect (but who is) (maybe you should go more in the whispering mode: that part of the text so from from 0:40 and the repeat of it). For Idea and potential 5*

There are some certain overdrives concerning the voice track. Would be a good idea to use a compreesor in the voice-track. Independent from your song this is common. Voice Tracks never without compression.

Otherwise - strange, but interesting song.

you can buy a usb mic mmm
and the voice sound better

good song

  juan

Hey Lori,

this version is much better.......your ideas are cool and creativ.......the technical Side limping a bit. The time will showing.

L.G

Lefty

really good and fresh

datamix

klasse

diese version ist besser

gute arbeit

gruss die redis

Hi, it´s a great song, i already told you in the last version! But it seems you have problems with the record of your fantastic voice, there is a lot of overdrive! I think it´s the only one part in these track you have to rework!

Necessarily use a compressor! Look at the right peak, you may not see any red lights during the record.

LG Jeff

HI,

it´s really agood pop-art soundtrack and i see you have fun.

So passt das ganze gut

jetzt gibts auch 5*
 

Hast Du so Deine Eigenart entdeckt -:Nehmen wir Dir echt nicht übel -:Musik ist eben vielfältig!

YaraLove

Servus Lori!

Better! They told you your mistakes. I like to see your progress. Try to sing it with 10 cm more distance and the same volume in your voice. Than play with the compressor and chose the one you like most. Change the input level from your mic. There are many parameters to taste out. I think you are a " little silly thing " !!! The pictures show me again and again. You know, how I mean these words. Your face looks like sunshine. If I see a picture of you I start to smile!  To the others: THIS IS NO LOVE STORRY!! Just feelings I enjoy.

Thank youuuuuu, Uwe

Much better my funky friend!

I like it. You could normalize the whole track when you are done...this might help the balance. Keep singing!

Bel brano, Bel ritmo, un tocco di classico

al genere punk, la voce particolare, con

una tecnica di distorsione esclusiva e particolare,

comunque molto gustosa.

In definitiva un ottimo lavoro

         Roy

its nice only you wolud have been done mpre better...take long time take rest do it as your best each and every song....we need more time bcoz its music

No exactly my cup of tea, though I like it ;-) Chapeau!