The Ebon Winged

HeavensSpear wrote on 3/4/2010, 11:54 AM
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Title: The Ebon Winged (Comp) Heaven's Spear Kittrell
Artists: Heaven's Spear Kittrell
Album: Z
First song that I created. The song doesnt actually start until about 3 minutes The first minute or two is a prelude/Intro. Then the local radio introduction. It is a main stream metal radio station called 95.9 WRZK "K-rock". A show called the "The monday night edge" played the short version for several weeks.The show played regional and local bands and allowed new artists to send in demos to see how they fared. To my surprised some people called in to request it the following week. The song isnt great to me..but the Dj classified it's genre as Gothic Metal. I myself have no clue what to call it. Please tell me what you think?
...a very strange song, but I knew where my mind was when I made it. Ive gotten better, and have collaborated with other people.


http://forkeyth.magix.net/website/
please tell me what you think ? Also how I can improve..any help is better than none. Also would like to find out if anyone knows if people on the video making side ever team up with music maker artists to make avis or music vids for youtube or anything

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siggi_s wrote on 3/4/2010, 5:24 PM
Hey,

my English is not so good!

But your Music is Exzellent! The Sound here ist to High!

Please new Song!



G Siggi
Spartano wrote on 3/5/2010, 2:54 AM
Eine Klasse Arbeit und Musik, Leider ist deine Musik vom Ton Übersteuert,
Versuche es nochmal in eine deutlich besseren Ton Qualität.
Herzlichen Gruß Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Rana wrote on 3/5/2010, 2:26 PM
The only thing where I feel the need to identify as an area for improvement is the overmodulation but than may be it is essentially required for the dark mood it carries.

I have become an immediate fan of yours, its a rocking track & I love it...top respects.

Goes in my Favs!
ALBIrecords wrote on 4/7/2010, 3:04 PM
hi, sehr übersteuert aber sehr cool. mix den nochmal ab, dann ist richtig geiles darkwavehardrock, gute arbeit, ich kann die übersteuerung korregieren! einfach ein wenig leiser, reicht, denke ich!
gg, albi*****
its your first, its ok.
SentientAudio wrote on 4/8/2010, 1:30 PM
Ich würde sagen, dieses Lied würde THT mein Favorit, wenn Sie senken würde die Gitarre ein little.there ist zuviel distortion.I wie Sie Ihre Stimme in diesem einen
Kabegami wrote on 4/10/2010, 8:01 AM
Foto I like or the musik is good ! full voting