The Seed

Padgett wrote on 12/2/2010, 10:28 PM
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 This is for those whom want my origional voice...I started this song one morning when I woke up about 3 months ago. I just sat down and put the first half together in a mornings time.  Not sure why it was in my head. I seem to have these "burst" of tallent??? or whatever I seem to have, it just needs expressed. I really am learning this inner sole I seem to have with Music.  My Father, God Rest His Sole, was an Artist of many talents and I am sure this is him shining out in me. I have an ear for music and an eye for art.  And Many OTHER talents...lol as well.  I worked on it these last few days to get it out there.  Just a short song abuot me growing!  I have alot of confidence in my in-experienced talent...yet sorry if it seems just play'n.  You are all I got to take me serious...and serious is where my heart is.  I have KNOWONE around me that really even want to play with me...in a figure of speech... and knowone whom is a bit musicly enclined.  I picked up a mic for the first time ever last year, other than singing a song I wrote at 2 of my girlfriends funerals,:(. God rest their Sole! I will probably present that song solo. (Coming Soon)  Anyways, I REALLY appreciate all of your professional and personal touch's to me and my heart.  My growth will be reconized through learning through this web site and other as well on my own. I'd be lost with out this program and you!  THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR HELPING ME BECOME A BETTER PERSON IN MY JOURNEY OF LOVE FOR MUSIC AND ART! I also don't know a darn thing about audio??? But learning!!! Yes?

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Padgett wrote on 12/2/2010, 10:44 PM

Well................?????????  Watcha Think???  I'm comfortable with it....everything could be better, right!  So tell me?  I'm all ears and never offended. 

Njego wrote on 12/3/2010, 3:29 AM

True emotions !!!!

Spartano wrote on 12/3/2010, 5:02 AM

Eine Gute Musik, Die Musik müsste viel Besser Gemastert werden, deine Stimme würde dann besser zu Geltung kommen, Herzlichen Gruß Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Former user wrote on 12/3/2010, 5:35 AM

Many problems in your mix, especially for voice. Here is a positive review, which will allow you to modify and evolve. You've no doubt a great talent, but must develop it. You must persevere, there are good things in what I heard. With what material do you work?

 

Former user wrote on 12/3/2010, 5:51 AM

Soundtracks kriege ich nicht hin -:Du musst mal hier eingiges zu Herzen nehmen -:Tipps und solche Sachen!

 

YaraLove

Former user wrote on 12/3/2010, 7:58 AM

nice work love the mixture of this track voice can be improved with more vocal practice but all in all very well done indeed

its nice to here some one singing 4 a change thx for the heads up to this track best wishes from

madmanfx68

LEFTHANDER wrote on 12/3/2010, 9:07 AM

Deiner Musik fehlt am Anfang der Rythmus...im Laufe der Zeit kommt der Ball ins Rollen .....ab 2.33 hört sich alles schön schräg an und der Rythmus ist auch gefunden.

 

Arbeite noch ein wenig am Mix und Mastering. Deine Stimme find ich echt cool .....allerdings solltest Du auch hier noch ein wenig nacharbeiten.

 

Kannst dich nur noch steigern und versuche die Harmonien zwischen deiner Stimme und der Musik zu verstärken das beide mehr auf einem Level sind.

 

LG

Lefty

Former user wrote on 12/3/2010, 12:34 PM

Hi!

 

Yes, the mix is not so good. The voice and the gits are sometimes to loud. Your own voice is not bad!! Try to mix it better and you will see what is possible to make with this track. I think it could become good.

 

Ng,Uwe

 

It´s hard work to write in english. But I have LEO....

Sandro_Glavina_Channel wrote on 12/3/2010, 6:36 PM

I don't take into consideration the technical outcome of the record, because I listened and appreciated your "software" (voice, music, creativity all very good) ciao da sandro

Sandro Glavina is an italian composer, named L'Uomo e L'Ombra. The choice of the name derives from the title of the album "L'uomo e l'ombra" of the band "Abstract Music Nuova Esistenza", an experimental group founded by Sandro Glavina together with his friends in the mid-70s.

In the period 2009-2022, L'Uomo e L'Ombra has done 84 albums. The compositions of Sandro Glavina are partly influenced by progressive rock. Sandro has developed a personal style with many experimentations and actualizations. He offers music beyond borders by intertwining different styles in crossover with each other. Prog, psychedelia, classical, post-rock, jazz, pop are some of the influences that dissolve in ambient atmospheres, citations of contemporary music and minimalist nuances. Sandro Glavina aka L'Uomo e L'Ombra plays the music using VSTI synthesizers, keyboards and adds some loops. Sandro isn't a professional musician, composes and plays music just for fun, but his works reach a good outcome, pleasant to listen. L'UOMO E L'OMBRA

https://www.jamendo.com/artist/495948/l-uomo-e-l-ombra/albums

https://www.reverbnation.com/luomoelombra/songs

https://www.facebook.com/luomoelombra/

   

Blackpool wrote on 12/3/2010, 6:39 PM

For me, a very interesting piece. The electric guitar I had left out in the beginning.
Later, she is sometimes too loud.
The effect with your voice towards the end, i like it very much!

I've heard it several times and I like it!
 

sincerely

Carlo

Former user wrote on 12/4/2010, 6:39 AM

Hi jennerjohn,

a nother good Song from jennerjohn.

papajeff wrote on 12/4/2010, 10:27 PM

Hi, an intressting song, you´ve a good voice, but sometimes i can hear little disharmonics, i think you must rework the vocalmix then it become a really good track!

LG Jeff

holie wrote on 12/5/2010, 1:45 AM

Basically a really good track! I like your smoky voice! You got the technical references . . . I still have one: the slow part (beginning 1:04) is for me a little out of the rhythm ?!

Go ahead . . . your father is proud and smiles, I'm sure !

Regards ! Karin

Photohansel wrote on 12/6/2010, 1:07 PM

Gefählt mir...

deine Stimme hier ... frech und bestimmend... Toll !!!

Liebe Grüsse

Photohansel

smartsmurf wrote on 12/18/2010, 1:03 PM

Timing and Mastering...

 

You have the ideas... now there's time for some "technical stuff"...

 

redisland wrote on 12/24/2010, 3:26 AM

stimme u. sound gefällt uns

am mastering noch etwas arbeiten, dann passt es

 

 

gruss die redis