ich bitte ume entschuldigung, aber dies ist nix.

Indie,

I must admit that this particular song doesn't measure up to most of your previous offerings.  But this is your creation.  Thank you for uploading this here for me to listen to.  I think that maybe this was a little rushed, and you just need a little more time to go back, listen to it, and make any changes you feel need to be made.  Take your time with your pieces...I've heard some of your offerings where you have taken the time to really orchestrate and organize and those offerings are golden.

There is no wrong song, Indie.  Maybe songs that need to be re-worked or re-edited a bit.  But there is no right or wrong song.  You created this, and you are free to upload your creations here.  We are here to help each other create great music, videos, etc.  Do not be disheartened, or discouraged.  You have a great start with this song.  Just go back and listen to it again.  You are a great artist.  Keep pushing forward.

I believe in you!

Brenda