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Former user wrote on 10/4/2015, 5:50 AM

I would track very delicate and light and pleasant sounds
I would say that there are strong fusion with jazz music.
fine

franco

Former user wrote on 10/4/2015, 6:09 AM

very good sound compliment

Frasangalaglav

Piazzini wrote on 10/4/2015, 3:24 PM

Hoi Indigo

The sound of the instruments I find good and authentic. But unfortunately I do not have here any structure in the music.

Sometimes it sounds like jazz, sometimes after Chillout ..... but somehow it is to perform hardly according to the listener.

en liebe gruess vom

sandro

gospelbj1 wrote on 10/4/2015, 4:29 PM

Hi Indie,

Great piece.  At :28 and 1:16 into the song, the piano solo takes on a life of its own but then it is cut short.  If you carry out that solo a little longer that would really give your song a boost.  Extend it by piecing together samples similar in style to it, then come back with the slower piano rhythm.  I think your structure is good, but there are a lot of change ups in the song...changing from one style of jazz to another.  If you decrease the amount of changes or space them out more, it would help structurally.  The song is only 2:32.  You have a great start here.  Continue to work and build on this...it has the makings of a great jazz piece.

Awesome start.

BC

gerrycix wrote on 10/4/2015, 6:02 PM

Great Idea ...Indigo !

Fine sound .....

Ciao David

stuallan wrote on 10/6/2015, 11:28 AM

Hi Indigo,

Nothing like the sound of an upright bass to slip you into that "jazz" mood. The idea is great, just a bit of tweaking as Brenda mentioned would bring this right into the groove.

Great job!

 

Best Regards,

Stu