I do not know your musical training. I will only give an opinion on what I've heard.
the trace is clearly built with loops magix, the sounds are very light and catchy, in my opinion we would need to make some changes in the arrangement and volume adjustment, but overall I would say that is not bad
Hi All. Thanks for comments. This is really my first song in Magix... then I sorry for any hmmm .... imperfections :-)
Thanks for listening and comment. !!
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I have no traning... :-) I love making music .. any kind. Synth Guitar...now in comp.... but I only IT Admin :-)
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This song was supposed to be so uneven. Morning calm southern tumult, and afternoon and evening rush mute. I know that it was possible to compose a cleaner ... but you know .... it's my first time :-D