You go hard in, maybe a slower Intro would be nicer.
I miss a Guitar solo, or Chant to it.
But that´s my personal Opinion
But a cool Track, like it.
I agree and love these ideas Picnicboy! Once I learn more how to operate the DAW these ideas will happen eventually. Time is a big factor also. And that is out of my control mostly. I wish I could say I was the master of time. Phuck it I can. " I am the master of time! " lol : ) Until I can return to the this track I will put forth an effort to capture pure Ideas like this one and then build upon them. And hopefully the producer skills needed to manage such dealings with multi tracking will develop. I truly do thank you for your time, comments and appreciation it means the world to me. Thank You and if ever any inspirations, ideas and or influences rise from listening to my music please leave a comment. You are more than welcome anytime. Lyrics develop from words also. So all is good! Thank you
Thank You ! I had to look a couple of these words up to gain better understanding of the meanings. One I may use as a band name very soon. Thank You very very much for your comments and inspirations! Thank You