Eye In the Sky

Eleyan wrote on 8/9/2014, 5:32 AM
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Eye,   in the sky,  do you see me?    x2

(Too too too too,  too too too too   ooh oh oh ohh)

Oh -------------------------------   Hah  air eh ah

I came to find you    (Who told you,  we were here?)
I saw the Star            (Your light's all over,  all over the sky)

A new connection,     will take me high     hAh  oh-----------

Comments

Former user wrote on 8/10/2014, 12:31 PM

Hi! Du. Warum sind es Stücke, die kaum jemand richtig kommentieren kann? Es sind nur kleine Schnipsel von Dir. Elegant und auch gut gemacht. Nur zu kurz.

LG / aces-e37

Farstom wrote on 8/10/2014, 3:28 PM

well done

i like it

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Spartano wrote on 8/11/2014, 3:08 AM

Mache deine Musik 2 Minuten länger , dann Bewerte ich es auch, lg, von Spartano!

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Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Former user wrote on 8/11/2014, 7:54 AM

this is definitely not a trace of easy listening, both musical and vocal.
I think you might think that this is your work of pure research.
in this case my opinion is positive

franco

Eleyan wrote on 9/5/2014, 11:42 AM

Thank you so much everyone for your comments so far.  I would love to make this, and others of my music creations longer, but i have a problem.  The software has so many glitches and I work until the glitches take over, then I have to stop.  I know.  It's is very annoying having such short samples of work.  Only a week ago I started another song, and the glitches reduced me to wanting to throw my laptop out the window.  I need a callaborator here in Melbourne who's software works fine for them.  I dream of this.  Good luck and may the Magix be with you.

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12th Gen Intel(R) Core(TM) i5-12400   2.50 GHz

2TB Storage, 32.0 GB RAM. Using AudioBox USB96 for recording & playback with headphones.

stuallan wrote on 11/21/2014, 12:18 PM

Hi Eleyan,

I know I probably did this backwards, commenting on your lastest song first however, just found you having commented on another song. In any case, I hope you get your softwarev / laptop problems fixed, I hear great potential here and would love to hear you cut loose and work with the proper tools.

 

Will keep checking in.

Best Regards,

Stuart

PS Great picture.

Eleyan wrote on 3/3/2023, 6:25 AM

Thank you all, and Stuart, yes I got a 32GB Ram laptop which handles the load much better, and in general, this year things have gone pretty well until the preamp I as using died. Now nothing works correctly and I have to wait to get a new one, as the audiobox 96 from presonus is having asio driver issues that are crashing Magix.