I recently amped up my mixing game and this track is the first product of it all.
Let us know if it hits the mark, or falls dramatically. I am interested in your comments, both good and bad.I'm no musician, but the sound quality sounds great to me, Martin. Great track (and I'm not even a fan of rap). Like it a lot.
Hi Martin,
That is a great first, mate!
Rap vocals are really good (and I do like Rap, so at least I can differ between good and bad rapping) and well harmonising with the music.
The music itself is also nice - for my ears it could have been a bit more aggressive but then again, it might not have fitted the lyrics and the style of rapping that well.
The sound of the song is great - well balanced and crystal clear.
Clearly, full five stars from me, no doubt on that.
Best regards,
Norbert
Very very interesting and cool sound!
The rap is good, but the intrumental could be a bit more varied.
I like it.
Hi Martin,
I like this.
My advice is to have fun with this. I would add additional synth or instrumentation for variation at :38 in. At 1:17, add some really strong bottom end to this to kick it off. (more bottom end synth, drums, percussion, strings, etc) Martin, don't be afraid to experiment here. You actually have a feel for this and you can create some really impressive pieces. You have a tremendous start. Also, please continue to add to this...I wanted to hear more of what you were doing with this and it stopped at 2:18. I loved how you ended the song...please keep that as your ending.
Very Impressive!
Brenda
Wow! Great work bro! I loved the vibe in the percussion area; awesome. The bass line totally bounces and is as strong as you can get for a platform. Loved it.
Underground hip hop! I like the minimalist music. Great start with the strings. Then just a bass groove and backing drums and percussion. with some synths that are well placed. I like the keyboard atmoshere in the. ["Everyone's tough son..."] part.
The rap is fine. I think there are a couple of very minor syllable timing issues but that is about it really.
I like that it is more musical poetry than generic "Yo" "Ho" Rap.