Maybe the start of this track is a little too sudden... but I like the sounds you 've used... nice break, variation but steadiness of your track theme...
...I quite like this "piece".
The ending was to quick... don't ever just cut off a track like this.
Now go for "more interesting" covers for your tracks... and start to listen and comment on others as well...
...like sandro already pointed out... There's much to learn here (if you use this community the right way).