I´m not shure.....
It´s verry clear... ok.....
Each note has it´s exact place....ok...
I like Rock...
But something, for me, I am missing.
Something like live-energie... ok, it´s only my impression.
Maybe, it could be a little bit faster and something, that makes the different tracks more closer. Adding a voice, chor, percussion... i don´t know... something like this. Where ist the Power, the screaming or dancing in your head and heart? What happends?
You are a good musican, i think, you are able to make it better.