Yea, this is of course a little bit "heavier" than the original, delicate song, but this is a different level :)

Original: 

I know that the piano passages could be improved, but my skills is not enough of this for the better. I do not know how to play the piano almost at all, all the notes are written by hand "in a box". I have a plan to take piano lessons during the summer. On the other hand I am relatively satisfied with the piano portion of the entire context. But its always that way, it can be always be better :)

Hello juhalipsanen,

You have created a very nice track, I like it!!!!!!!

All the best,

Jinty...

...mit sommer, strand und zehen im sand verbinde ich deine musik auch nicht...sie erzeugt in mir eher eine nachdenklich-melancholische stimmung...aber wer sagt, dass man am strand nicht auch mal melancholisch sein darf......und ich habe den eindruck, dass du an deiner musik im wahrsten sinne des wortes gearbeitet hast...vielleicht kommt sie deshalb so etwas "schwer" herüber, weil die mühe & arbeit durchklingt...oder vielleicht ist ja genau das dein anliegen...egal, wie auch immer...für meine ohren hast du ein sehr schönes stück musik gemacht...

beabea.....i think you are right, about the mood.

My original song, was melancoly type, i wrote there:

"Summer lasts only a few moments here, and the melody that I made, there is a moment in there somewhere, on the beach on a summer evening. It was and will be again."
 

So, maybe this, a new version is same, even with drums. And when i wrote this song, it was the winter, and i miss the summer. So melancolic mood is here, you are right.