i do like it ... perhaps you do give the piano, strings, gui and sax (or what ever your instruments are) a little bit more power ... the intro had (all together) good dynamics for me ... but on ca. 2 min .. everything is in the background ... the break @2:20 is a little bit 2 hard (but if you would pusch some instruments on the bridge it could be less hard)
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pease don´t forget ... everything i do wride is only my opinion/idea ... it is yours to try it ...
lg alex
(all together i would give you a 5-6 cause of the rapid end and the master ... but the idea would get a 7-9 i am not total sure cause i was not allowed to notice the most of the sounds compleatly)