until 1:39 its well done, but then... the segue is a bit too harsh. after the beginning melody comes back it sounds good again. At 3:05 same mistake too harsh segue. The reason why you do this is cause You use too many samples in this track.
the track would have been great if you had only used the samples from the beginning (0:00-1:39).
I will give 4* cause you managed to get a fabulous melody at the beginning on the one hand, but on the other hand you destroyed the structure and the good beginning by using too many samples that dont fit into this track.
Hope you will regard this criticism before you make another Trance track.
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