smartsmurf wrote on 9/13/2013, 12:53 PM

If you feel like you could have done better... you are right. 

I'm not very convinced of your track building (if there is such thing)... and unfortunately... you seem to have forgotten the bass... and that's a "no go"...

smartsmurf wrote on 9/13/2013, 3:00 PM

i guess there is bass... but (maybe) not enough.

keep bass drum and bass in the middle, but you can place hihats or other percussions on either side, work also more with reverb and/or delay to create a better stereo field (panorama)...



siggi_s wrote on 9/13/2013, 3:25 PM


denke auch dass man  da mehr draus machen kann, auch in der Länge,

der war etwas zu kurz!

LG Siggi