The Vigil

HeavensSpear wrote on 6/30/2010, 1:23 AM
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Concept:

This is about a dream of watching my love's vessel carry her away to distant lands, and the promise to await her return faithfully,no matter how long it takes.The frustration and madness, the desperation and torture of being without the other half of the self.
So imagine if you will, being a light keeper with a weathered eye upon turbulent seas, You do not sleep, You do not eat...you keep flame on the furnace that reflects from mirrors into lenses that issue forth a beam...across the great expanse of the ocean...to light the way...for your..love's return to your needy arms.....that is a "Vigil"

Lyrics:
"The Vigil"by Heaven'sSpear

Wait right here for me
Wait right here my baby
Wait right here my loving one
I'll be back before you blink
Liar..
Where now have you flown
Absconder,where now have you gone
Ive been waiting here for you, it seems for a thousand years...please come home
Ive been drowning in a downpour of as many tears, pleading dont go

I'll wait here for you,just like this
I'll wait here for you...as once promised
I'll wait and keep so still..and so quiet...til you come home
and with a memory of your kiss, I'll keep flame on the torch
...I alone
Life is stormy weather
and it will last forever
until you come back to me
My oceanic Treasure
Ive endured...and endeavored
to be vigilent and watch the seas

You see, my inner child awaits from a time when we were born
but for the man's sake, I need you in my arms
come home.
End.
By Heaven'sSpear

Comments

frajo2008 wrote on 6/30/2010, 3:24 AM
big song and a great voice... 5*
Spartano wrote on 6/30/2010, 5:01 AM
Hallo mein Freund Heavens Spear!
Schön das du nach lange Zeit wieder bei uns bist!
Eine außergewöhnliche Musik, man fühlt der Schmerz der Liebe, keine Entfernung kann eine Liebe Trennen,
Exzellente Musik! 5* Herzlichen Gruß dein Musikfreund Joachim!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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ALBIrecords wrote on 6/30/2010, 9:35 AM
very nice rockmusic!
gg for you and zaheeda,
albi*****
SpriteBat wrote on 6/30/2010, 1:55 PM
Passionate and powerful as always! Great concept, good vocals, and the music really puts images in my head. Overall, this is a very impressive song! I hope one day I can put this much emotion into my music. 5*
redisland wrote on 6/30/2010, 2:39 PM
klasse song

gruss thomas,michel u. dieter
siggi_s wrote on 6/30/2010, 5:10 PM
Hey,

kann mich meinen Vorrednern da nur anschließen!

 ! Dein Gesang bringt das gewisse Feeling!

G Siggi
datamix wrote on 6/30/2010, 8:12 PM
hello
The concept is good, dark , drama and tension around the issue, it seems an "ode" rock
excellent voice and personality, very very good
congratulations 5+++++ and favs
datamix
Pyrex wrote on 7/1/2010, 3:02 PM
Hi HS, learning english by reviewing your song,...

A very good song with a great rock-athmosphere (again).

Very good beginning, than at 2.54 my favorite place,
at 4.07 it sounds a bit unclean. To my ears, the rhythmguitar there
(between 4.07 and 4.30) is not necessary.
Simple but allthough powerful drums, and a good mix over all.
End, brillant, (the 2 higher "come home"s)....but (maybe) to long.
with good fx`s.    5*

I think someone (between ALBIrecords and Spartano) likes you:-)

gp



Frantzi wrote on 7/1/2010, 3:51 PM
Klingt für mich gut und ehrlich, mit guter Simme (leider zu weit in Hintergrund) und gutem Melodieaufbau...
Die "einsame Nachtwache" kommt für mich sehr gut rüber, inklusive aller persönlicher "Dämonen"...
Von mir für Feeling, Instrumentierung und "Zusammenbau"
5*
(technisch ginge es noch besser und Du weist es auch...)
Franz
SentientAudio wrote on 7/2/2010, 9:21 AM
Die Musik ist episch Die Stimme ist für dieses Genre ungewöhnlich, ich meine, es ist sehr gut, ich frage mich, wie es klingen würde, wenn Sie ein Studio gingen, dieser Song ist über alle toll. Nun aber aus

Gruß
S A
papajeff wrote on 7/2/2010, 9:39 AM
Hi, a very melancholy ballad with hard guitar riffs. The beginning takes me a little too long, but then the song is really good down to business.
Regards, Jeff
ArtistW wrote on 7/2/2010, 7:00 PM
Good emotional singing (as it should be). Intro a little too long.
THEJOSUAMAN wrote on 7/3/2010, 12:12 PM
Fantastico!

Una canción con mucha calidad. La voz me ha gustado mucho.

Un trabajo sin duda de 5*

Saludos.

Javier
Guitorb wrote on 7/3/2010, 1:57 PM
 I love the FX on the intro vocal track(something we don't hear enough of in this forum). Your attention to detail is par excellence. If you follow this path in all aspects of your life then it is no wonder that you are experienceing that rarest of all human gifts,True Love.
Kabegami wrote on 7/3/2010, 5:00 PM
Grand Einführung! Es ist episch in der Natur. Ich kann Schmerz und Sehnsucht in Ihrem Gesang zu hören, die beeindruckend ist, weil so viele Songs, die emotional sein sollten, wenn sie nur mit gesungenen keine Persönlichkeit gesungen werden. Sie halten die großen Werke meiner friend.This One ist ein Favorit von mir!
Gruß
clausaxelsen wrote on 7/6/2010, 6:33 PM
Hey HeavensSpears.
Very good music. You have a very fine feeling in the song and music.
And it is not happynes, if you can`t see the one you love.
Keep gooing.
Claus
Rana wrote on 7/7/2010, 1:23 PM
Salutes my friend, you have a very distinctive style of your own and have made your indispensible place in the community. Splendid track.
Former user wrote on 7/8/2010, 2:26 PM
very very nice song!!


Regards, Beamish
StoneFace wrote on 7/14/2010, 11:53 AM
that's your style and your voice has a high recognition value. That's good.
The sound is not distorted and sounds very clean.

dark cool music

A hard cut "at 6:24 with some reverb on the "last".
That would be possibly a more fitting end


Solista wrote on 7/17/2010, 2:30 PM
I agree with StoneFace about your style and voice. I like the dark ambience you're creating. Awesome song.
There are two things I'd like to suggest:
- What about using a real guitar instead of that somewhat artificial sounding distorted rhythm guitar?
- I think there's a little lack of bass at least in some parts of the song and makes it less powerful as it could be. (Not sure of that, but I'd have a try)
Former user wrote on 10/10/2010, 2:40 PM

Hello !

 

I Love this song alsa !! 5**

 

Best regards, CjArtw

TheMechanicalWorker wrote on 10/18/2010, 4:03 AM

Hi,
absolutely beautiful song, your voice is really awesome. So much to bring a lot of feeling into a song is not easy! Respect and 5 * from me.

 

Greetings
Christian