Even though freshsmint's 5 stars look nice... unfortunately they're far from honest.
The track starts with some nice ambient sounds... but when the beat begins it totally destroys 1st impression. It's completely overmodulated (watch your peakmeter to avoid the "red area"... or use your mixer to control your track's maximum volume...). Besides I think the beat is "a little" too monotonous...
You should do something about the mix, but I have the feeling you have the feeling for some nice sound combinations (maybe someone singing too in addition)