As I Write This Song

Roy_Oliver_Music wrote on 1/31/2010, 7:39 PM
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A song about appreciating the littlest things he likes about his loved one. I dedicate this song to my loving wife for 17 years, who showed me that life gets better and better as we grow old together. The bond of marriage, that no one must take away. I love you very much, my dear Amie.
  

As I Write This Song (lyrics)
i would like to see
smiling back at me
a person true and honest of what she feels
we can talk for hours
not wond'rin what people think of us
as long as i'm in love with you, hmm
i would like to hear
your words that seem so clear
the lyrics of the songs you sing to me
your hand that touches mine
girl i get shivers all the time
that's why i think of you
(chorus)
as i write this song
oh, i'm in love with you
as i write this song
oh, words can't say how true
as i write this song
oh, come my love and stay with me
and watch the sunset
i want to spend the rest of my life
with you...

i would like to touch
your face i long so much
with every step i take,
a prayer for you
those kisses every night
you whisper hold me tight
i'm happy to have you near me
i would like to kiss
your lips i always miss
each time you go away i long for this
at the end of the day
i stop and smile and say
these words, i sing to you
(do, chorus,chorus)
i want to spend the rest of my life with you...

See the special video for this lovely song:



I Love You.
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Comments

stewardIII wrote on 2/1/2010, 2:38 AM
Vom Aufbau nicht schlecht. Würde den Song aber unbedingt noch mit Effekten und Masterin nachbearbeiten.

4*

MfG

stewardIII
beabea wrote on 2/1/2010, 4:28 AM
beautiful song - simple and honest...
binobino wrote on 2/1/2010, 5:50 AM
very beautiful ! regards binobino
Rana wrote on 2/1/2010, 8:45 AM
Its the simple things in life that give us the best pleasures, a wonderful song my friend and I like the simplicity in it, On ambience, I would share Skirons' thoughts and would say - keep it simple
Former user wrote on 2/1/2010, 9:46 AM
Sehr schöner Somg, mit viel Gefühl

LG, Werner
Former user wrote on 2/1/2010, 10:28 AM
Hi Roy,

This is a beautiful declaration of love for your wife. and that you've played this live singing and I think pretty sore.
also your text to do so.
While the mix of the whole has a few flaws, but that's how it is ... live is live ...

Many greetings to you

Hartmut

Mr.Thomson wrote on 2/1/2010, 11:30 AM
Nice Song, but he rush of the ocean interferes the sound.

;)MRT
Former user wrote on 2/1/2010, 12:14 PM
Eine wunderbare Gitarre mit einer guten Melodie. Persönlich würde ich aber noch ein wenig im Mix der Stimme im gesamten Arrangement feilen.

Gruß An-ton
TommyG wrote on 2/1/2010, 12:16 PM
Nice handmade stuff. The sound could be better, but it´s recorded with a micro, okay.

Simple but effective, good vocals & lyrics
Cosmozentriker wrote on 2/1/2010, 12:50 PM
I love it!  

Former user wrote on 2/1/2010, 3:46 PM
schön!
siggi_s wrote on 2/1/2010, 4:25 PM
Finde den richtig Klasse!

Auf das wesentliche beschränkt!

Wenn jemand so Super singen kann, bedarf es keiner großen Technik!

Super!

G Siggi
Frantzi wrote on 2/1/2010, 5:48 PM
As you wrote this song your heart was full of emotions and feelings...and this reaches us (neglecting all technical problems you perhaps would have)...
A great song wich is worth to go to the Favs...
5*
and Fav (for me)
Franz
redisland wrote on 2/2/2010, 1:51 AM
sehr schön
gruss dieter
drink wrote on 2/2/2010, 4:32 AM
well ... living the simple ! regards
papajeff wrote on 2/2/2010, 11:24 AM
Wunderbare Liebeserklärung, schöne Gitarre und tolle Stimme!
LG Jeff
Spartano wrote on 2/2/2010, 12:43 PM
Eine Exzellente schöne Musik! 5* Herzlichen Gruß dein Musikfreund  Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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holie wrote on 2/2/2010, 3:14 PM
sehr sehr schön !

Lieben Gruß
Karin

Guitorb wrote on 2/2/2010, 5:17 PM
 Too sweet......I need something salty....quickly
Former user wrote on 2/3/2010, 4:36 AM
wonderful sweet song !!

great sweet and soft voice !!

excellent !!

sound very good !!

lg,
Roland

thanks "cosmic" for sending !!
sinnuli70 wrote on 2/3/2010, 1:29 PM
Hello

Paul (Cosmic) has send me your song.I have no words for this. You are simply one of the best Singers here in this com. You´re voice goes under my skin. You bring very much feelings in your song. I think, now you have many more fans. And i am one of those.                                                                Ulrike
ComicHeld wrote on 2/4/2010, 1:07 PM
great great great feeling
wow


Former user wrote on 2/7/2010, 4:21 PM

A very good song, a great voice, an old guitar
5*, Fav.
Best regards Dieter

 

Michel-Solo-Band wrote on 2/8/2010, 1:14 PM
I am speechless!!!!

A wonderful love song,... been able to recited in lyric.

Great voices and a wonderfull guitar....5*

Best regards

Tyler