Hi friends,
I have finally found the time to finish a new song.
Mastering was a big problem with this song.
I'm still not completely happy, but i present it here anyway.
Made with samples and midi.
Singing and text is from me.
Best enjoyed on headphones.
Hallo Freunde,
Ich habe endlich die Zeit gefunden, um ein neues Lied zu beenden.
Mastering war ein großes Problem mit diesem Song.
Ich bin noch nicht ganz glücklich ist, aber ich präsentiere sie hier trotzdem.
Made mit Samples und Midi.
Gesang und Text ist von mir.
Best genossen über Kopfhörer.
LYRICS
There is a new girl in town
She is the cutest around
I've got to know her so well
She's fallen for me, i can tell
She lives at 44
You ask for Mary at the door
And if i go every day
She gives a discount when i pay
I've got a flashy car
It's the coolest by far
It has a great leather smell
It's got a V8 as well
It does 194
With my foot on the floor
I picked the lock on the door
And now i wanted by the law
Did i forget to mention
My life is two dimension
And i've got no direction
I'm a fake, i'm a fake
Is it drawn to your attention
That i'm full of self deception
There is total disconnection
I'm a fake, just a fake
Did i forget to mention
My life is two dimension
And i've got no direction
I'm a fake, i'm a fake
Is it drawn to your attention
That i'm full of self deception
There is total disconnection
I'm a fake, just a fake
Hammer-Teil. Rockt voll los. Betont gelassener Gesang, was mir außerordentlicg gut gefällt, ist mal was anders, als das sonst Übliche Rumgebrülle lol, kleiner Scherz, nein, aber dieses Lässige gefällt mir.
Was ich verbesseungswürdig finde, sind die scharfen Zischlaute im Gesang, die könnte man mit einem De-Esser herausfiltern.
Gute Arbeit.
Former user
wrote on 1/24/2010, 5:23 PM
Hi my friend, Good power on the rhythm section (sadly lacking on my Relic track). also enjoyed the well written chorus lyric. Vocal sounding v good as usual.
Good week ahead to ya. Peace Ian
That's great ! You cannot be a fake . . . I am sorry, is unfortunately impossible with this song !
Respekt !
Lieben Gruß
Karin
5* FAV
Former user
wrote on 1/24/2010, 6:40 PM
Straight Rock-Song how I like.
Yes, you are right the mastering is not the best. There is a metallic reverb(?) on the vocals, I think that sounds bad. And some sibilants (don't know if this the right translation, in german "zisch-Töne") when you singing.
Geiler Sound. Starke Nummer. Perfekt abgemischt. Eigene Stimme ?
Da Rock eigentlich auch mein bevorzugtes Genre ist, als Kollege 5*
MfG
stewardIII
Former user
wrote on 1/25/2010, 1:36 AM
I know what you mean, unhappy with the mastering,
but it is in such songs are often very difficult to make it 100%
The song itself is great once you have succeeded and Top !
it was right to upload it
He is still a worthy and enjoyable !!
Hi Brian, you know my opinion about you! I can only ever be repeated as song writer and singer you are to me, the absolute number one in this community!!
5 stars and best greetings ....... Freddy
Former user
wrote on 1/25/2010, 4:48 AM
Yes ............that`s Rock!
And the voice it`s great!Best regards,Ralf
I think, the sound is good, and i like this kind of straight rockguitars! Your voice sounds very cool. Maybe to much high frequences in the mastering because i can hear some strong ss.
Stil very good!
LG Jeff
Actually I think the mastering is quite ok. But the mix of the low frequency region could be better (in my ears). The Kick and the bass both are hard to recognize. (Bass probably covered by the low end of the guits?)
But nonetheless a great song! I like your cool way of singing.